The title of my scientific journal is “Identifying students models of sound propagation”. The main author is Zdeslav Hrepic, Dean Zollman and Sanjay Rebello. I also search for few of articles I find that each of journal all have the abstract of their investigation. The experiment is talking about the student use their voice in different medium and propagating through it. Student need to figure out other models is composed of entity and wave ingredients in various contexts. The language using is quite good because when they write a paragraph their language generally use academic vocabulary. For me I always use some verbal language to describe the process of experiment. The sentences always are not long but it is very specific. Also author use some pictures to illustrate the experiments. The pictures clearly to explain each model even in the conclusion author not only write the paragraph but also he uses the picture to completely explain the whole process of experiment and results. The interesting thing is when after the conclusion they have the further research I think it is useful when the students finish the experiment they will think about some of connecting problems. They also have the result and discussion the teacher will find some students to do an interview of the experiment and the teacher will ask some questions. The text is not very concise but it is very clear and academic the author uses many of subtitles of each section. At the end the author probably use some example from the other’s people so he had a reference of each concept that he use. It is a good format for me in the future because I like his structure of paragraph; each section is clear and specific also the picture part is good to explain the model even though some of paragraph when author use some formula or concept from the others. It is difficult but I think I can try it.
Reference: http://perg.phys.ksu.edu/papers/2002/PERC_Sound_Prop.pdf
Reference: http://perg.phys.ksu.edu/papers/2002/PERC_Sound_Prop.pdf